如何撰写入学申请文书?Writing an Admission Essay?

如何撰写入学申请文书?Writing an Admission Essay?

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Definition:

  • “An admission essay is used to assess the abilities of an applicant. The same basic structure will be used whether the applicant is applying for a vacancy with a company or a place on a college course.”

Basically, the applicant should use this as an opportunity to provide additional information to that provided on an application form or curriculum vitae to enable the prospective employer to make a better judgement about a candidate’s suitability. The essay may also be used to judge a candidate’s writing skills, so close attention should be paid to presentation.

Usually, the admission essay contains information about a candidate’s hobbies, interests, skills etc. and should be used to provide as broad a picture as possible of the person applying for the position. Essentially, it is an opportunity for the candidate to sell themselves so it should attempt to adapt or emphasize points in the applicant’s background which will be particularly applicable to either the job or course for which the applicant is applying; keep this in mind when writing your admission essay.

Whilst most admissions essays will require the candidate to write about themselves, on the lines of ‘what are your main interests’ or ‘what are your ambitions for the future’, it might be the case that a specific topic will be given which appears to be unrelated to the vacancy, such as ‘describe an important event in your life’ or ‘describe someone who has had a significant effect on your life’. Whilst these may appear to be unrelated to the vacancy, they do, in fact, give the assessor significant pointers as to the suitability of a candidate and, as such, are extremely important, especially as admissions essays are often used to make the final decision on a ‘marginal’ candidate. It is a good idea to write about what you know, as this will be where writing skills will be strongest and will also be most likely to give the reader an insight into your character.



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常见问题解答

问题招生官最想在Personal Statement里看到什么?
招生官首先寻找“匹配度”:学术背景、技能与课程要求的契合程度;其次是“成长潜力”——你如何通过过往经历证明未来能在该领域持续产出;最后是“个人特质”,如领导力、创造力或韧性。把这三点用具体故事呈现,而不是简单罗列奖项。例如,与其写“I am passionate about finance”,不如写“在帮助NGO设计3个月内筹资20%的众筹方案过程中,我发现自己对行为金融学的兴趣”。细节+结果才能打动人。
问题: 如何在PS里处理与申请专业看似无关的兴趣爱好?
采用“ transferable skills 桥梁法”。先描述兴趣本身,再提炼通用能力,最后连接到目标专业。例如:你热爱街舞,可强调团队协作、舞台节奏控制与即兴创作——这些都能映射到市场营销中的团队协作、活动策划与创意发想。用一句“街舞教会我在限定节拍里创造无限可能,这与XX专业的创新节奏不谋而合”即可自然过渡,既展示个性又紧扣专业。
问题: 边缘申请者(GPA/背景略低)如何用文书逆袭?
用“逆境—行动—收获”三段式。第一段坦诚说明客观劣势,但避免抱怨;第二段聚焦你为弥补差距采取的具体行动(如额外MOOC证书、科研项目、实习);第三段量化成果并展望未来,例如“通过Coursera完成5门数据分析课程后,我用新技能在实习中将报表效率提升40%,这坚定了我攻读数据科学硕士的决心”。招生官更看重成长曲线而非起点高低,真实故事+数据最能扭转印象。



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